Drabble: Completion of Remus Lupin

[ceredwensirius]

Title: Completion of Remus Lupin
Author: ceredwensirius
Word Count: 295
Characters, Pairing: Remus, Sirius, Remus\Sirius
Rating: NC17
Summary: James was an unwitting witness...now what?
Disclamer: Characters are not mine
Author's Notes: This was posted previously under a different user name however this author was me. This is my first slashy anything and like with all things new, I'm nervous about it.


A long, careful swipe of tongue licks pearly salt from the tip of his hardness which he still only tentatively presents. Remus can't quite believe this is happening, despite the fact that this has been on going for a couple of weeks now. Sirius drops his playful demeanor behind the close of curtain and is an earnest, heated lover. Uncertainty never plays a role.

The velvety fire of Sirius' mouth envelops him, seeming to want to swallow him whole. The dark head at his waist bobs and Remus feels the rush and flare of heat in his face. This is followed by a wet smacking sound as Sirius pulls away to speak.

"That turned you on, didn't it?" asks Sirius. His breath warms the tip of Remus' cock.

"What?" replies Remus, dazed, hard and not really up for conversation. Damn Sirius and his teasing.

"When you realized James was watching, I was rubbing you. You twitched. You only do that when you like something." Sirius puts his mouth back on him, and he's being slow about it.

Remus can only groan a sort of soft, pleasured sigh but he knows Sirius is waiting for an answer. He can feel those pale eyes burning into him.

"I think you want to be watched," says Sirius, pausing again.

And then it's not Sirius' mouth but his hand, pulling and squeezing perfectly; just how Remus likes.

"What if we hadn't noticed, what if I had sucked you off right there with James watching?"

Remus comes then, at the very thought of it, painting Sirius' neck and chest in hot, thick ropes of white. He glances down at Sirius who is smirking at him with that maddening grin.

"Oh, shut up," says Remus, before collapsing back against the bed.

Comments

[brighty18.livejournal.com]

Delicious! Remus getting off on being watched? Mmmm...

Sirius drops his playful demeanor behind the close of curtain and is an earnest, heated lover. Uncertainty never plays a role.
That feels so real to me!

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

Well, I'll be honest, as a sexual being I don't have a well formed opinion of Remus. I was chatting with the girl who plays Remus and she said in ff he is often portrayed as an exhibitionist. My reaction was sort of wow... Remus. Who knew? The idea stuck apparently and now Remus is evolving in my head as someone with a lot of sexual kinks. I always thought that would be Sirius for me but he's just sort of open minded, and you know... he like's to get off.

Hmm...

/babble

[brighty18.livejournal.com]

There is an idea that beneath Remus' essentially quiet, sensible demeanor, lies a total perv. And that's a perv in a good way. You know, the wolf. Exhibitionism, etc. is a big part of that.

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

*giggles*

Wow. Well, go Remus. I've only reasd a handful of R/S. I've no idea which way the tastes run in this ship and really, and I think I'm writing him so I can get him out of my head. I dount if my interpretations will match up with what the ship wants. It has been fun. There is something a little freer about writing two men than a man and a woman (or it could be Hermione). The differences have been interesting.