Drabble: Indecent Proposal

[ceredwensirius]

Title: Indecent Proposal
Author: ceredwensirius
Written For: grangerblack100
Challenge: Twice A Week
Rating: PG13
Warnings Suggestion of bestiality
Pairings: Hermione/Sirius
Word Count: 139
Summary: Continuation of Naughty Touching
Author's Note: This is the result of a conversation between wildeagainand myself about how to get squicky with it. In all honesty it is a very, very tame because I just couldn't make it go dirty.



Sensing that she had taken her accidental naughty touching more seriously than she ought to, Sirius transformed back into a wizard and walked over to where she was quietly talking to Harry and Ginny. Throwing an arm around her shoulders and tossing a wink to Harry and Ginny, he steered her away for a private word.

"What's wrong?" he asked patiently, hiding his exasperation about this part of her personality.

"Nothing," she lied. "Why?"

"Whether I look like this, or I look like Snuffles, you know it is always me in there, don't you?"

Hermione nodded.

"Good, because we come here twice a week and James is only going to get bigger and more rambunctious, could happen again."

Watching her cheeks flush with color prompted him to tease her by adding, "Maybe you and Snuffles should get better acquainted."

Comments

[duck-or-rabbit.livejournal.com]

I like that they both know the implications that surround this, but don't talk about what it resembles. It seems rather natural, however, for them to discuss it (not do anything, that is to say) since they are married here.

What concerns me most about the animagi thing isn't, ahem, er, you know, but that JK Rowling never properly explains the clothing after a transformation. And having seen Sirius in his faux fur velour robe in the OotP film sorts out nothing for me, just adds to the confusion.

Great job. ;)

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

Well, I agree. Does clothing egual fur? I rather think that in her mind the whole of the wizard or witch, wand and all, turns into the animal.

The more I try and think about this the more I realize that this is not really something I'm going to explore, ah...fully. I just don't write an anything goes sort of experience. I think he would tease her about it, just to see it make her blush, but I don't believe, that in the way I understand them, they would ever take this to very, uh, special place.

[duck-or-rabbit.livejournal.com]

I would be perhaps easier to explore if Hermione was the star in your pairing and not Sirius (I know you love her, but you are most inspired to write because of him, I think). And if you were to write a scene (won't go any further than saying that) with him as Padfoot, you'd be writing Hermione's POV. Hope that makes sense.

Edit: I mean, you could write it from Sirius' POV, but you'd have to make decision about whether you'd say things like "His paws caressed her" or just write the internal dialouge of Padfoot!Sirius without description of his physical appearance. It could be easier to be in Hermione's head for that.

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

That is a fair statement. I do tend to look at things through him rather than through her. I do love her in all her bossy, swottiness but he's my sugar rush.

But I'm confused, are you saying that if he was Padfoot he couldn't have a POV?

The closest I've come to imagining this play out is to picture him using Padfoot as an extra asset and therefore morphing between the two. Ultimately it just squicks, not delights, so I don't finish the daydream.

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

Well, shit! It won't let me edit.

I missed your edit, sorry.

[duck-or-rabbit.livejournal.com]

Hmm, wonder why you can't edit.

Oh. I know why. My reply back overlapped with your edit attempted.

[duck-or-rabbit.livejournal.com]

No, I'm not suggesting he couldn't have a pov as Padfoot. It just seems (to me) that if he were a dog, writing what Hermione feels when she's touched by him would be easier than writing what he feels when she touches him.

Try it either way! ;)

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

If I do it will be shared just between us. LOL!

[duck-or-rabbit.livejournal.com]

Ask me why James never transformed into Prongs when he and Lily did it...

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

This feels like a knock-knock joke! Ok, why didn't James ever transform into Prongs when he and Lily did it?

*snickers*
did it...what are we in 3rd grade, look at the two of us!

[duck-or-rabbit.livejournal.com]

Because James was horny enough when he was a wizard.

Get it? Horns. Antlers.

Totally awesome.

Yes, it was a knock knock joke and you played with me.

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

LOL! That's actually really cute!

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

Does it count as bestiality if Hermione's animagus form is a dog?

Of course then I'm just writing about two dogs fucking.

[duck-or-rabbit.livejournal.com]

LOL

the thread is officially sullied.

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

No, huh?

Not even if she is an adorable standard poodle, apricot in color...