Drabble: Indecent Proposal

[ceredwensirius]

Title: Indecent Proposal
Author: ceredwensirius
Written For: grangerblack100
Challenge: Twice A Week
Rating: PG13
Warnings Suggestion of bestiality
Pairings: Hermione/Sirius
Word Count: 139
Summary: Continuation of Naughty Touching
Author's Note: This is the result of a conversation between wildeagainand myself about how to get squicky with it. In all honesty it is a very, very tame because I just couldn't make it go dirty.



Sensing that she had taken her accidental naughty touching more seriously than she ought to, Sirius transformed back into a wizard and walked over to where she was quietly talking to Harry and Ginny. Throwing an arm around her shoulders and tossing a wink to Harry and Ginny, he steered her away for a private word.

"What's wrong?" he asked patiently, hiding his exasperation about this part of her personality.

"Nothing," she lied. "Why?"

"Whether I look like this, or I look like Snuffles, you know it is always me in there, don't you?"

Hermione nodded.

"Good, because we come here twice a week and James is only going to get bigger and more rambunctious, could happen again."

Watching her cheeks flush with color prompted him to tease her by adding, "Maybe you and Snuffles should get better acquainted."

Comments

[pelespen.livejournal.com]

I think it's easy to simplify and write off this aspect of Sirius and SB/HG on either side of the coin. Obviously the majority rule seems to be "ew no" which then shies any adventurous writer away from even trying it.

The thing is, it's just another aspect of the character that makes it that much more deep and complex, the actual sex of it being pretty small compared to the more symbolic and mental stuff. I guess the main thing that comes to mind is, on one hand, Snuffles is such a simple and pure costume to wear, it's like a way to free Sirius' own innocence for a bit. On the other hand, there's the primal beast aspect of it. And there's also how his relationships with other people when he's Snuffles colors the personal dynamics.

So really, squick is the least of it, imo.

However, I think you've done a great job of painting an opening here. I love Sirius' exasperation and teasing - it's perfect.

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

So the question I need to ask myself is:

"Do you feel adventurous, punk? Well, do ya?"

*giggles nervously*

It will take a very special prompt to go were very few (although it has been done) have gone before.

To be honest, I question whether or not it is even bestiality. He's not actually a dog but as you say a man in a somewhat elaborate costume. The real question is whether or not Hermione would tolerate this sort of adventursome sex. To write smut I have to be turned on by what I'm writing and I'm just not by this scenario so that complicates things further.