Drabble: Sirius' Booty

[ceredwensirius]

Title: Sirius' Booty
Author: ceredwensirius
Written For: grangerblack100
Challenge: Pirate
Rating: PG
Pairings: Hermione/Sirius
Word Count: 101
Summary: Sirius couldn't care less what anyone thought.
Sirius couldn't care less what anyone thought. Not while delicate feminine fingers ran soothingly through his hair, stroking him tenderly, assuring him that his life was exactly the way he wanted it to be; warm, safe and most importantly, loved, here in her embrace. Not even when Ron and Mrs. Weasley practically accused him of being the pirate that had stolen their treasure.

No, not even then.

My treasure now.

Turning his head away from her hand and into her soft belly he kissed her abdomen and ran his gaze up through her breasts to her eyes, smiling all the while.

Comments

[ilexx.livejournal.com]

Oh this was so sweet and made me sigh. Really well done. And yay for a happy Sirius moment.

I couldn't think of this challenge without thinking of the Beastie Boys. So juvenile of me, I know...

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

I am having that problem with 'Shared a Cheesecake' only I want to get all '9 1/2 Weeks' with it.

I'm trying to think of something less obvious but I may end up just giving in and going with it.

I'm glad you found the sweetness in it!

[ilexx.livejournal.com]

Hey! I'm 100 percent in favor of going '9 1/2 Weeks' with it! My vote is YES. It seems like the rest of us just managed to tease around it, so I say go for it!

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

I don't know...

I'm pondering it. I really want to finish out the year with having participated in all of the 2008 challenges but I'm 4 short right now so we'll see.

I'm having similar trouble with Curry. I'm so envious of wildeagain because she comes up with these wonderful, totally not obvious, insanely clever uses of the prompts.

[ilexx.livejournal.com]

Me too. The twice a week thing? yeesh. I don't know WHAT to say, now!
For what it's worth I wanted to do something like the 9-1/2 weeks idea with the cheesecake thing, but I started the story too early in the idea, so it never got to the sexiness. I need to work on big-picture brevity.
Curry and cheesecake - is it a food thing? ;)

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

All I picture with Curry is brief scenes on the East End or someone cooking at the kitchen. A thought I had today could have convinced me to give up writing, it was so dull.

[duck-or-rabbit.livejournal.com]

lol, you think so, huh? interstingly, i took down my twice a week drabble because only you and jen commented, and i worried readers found it offense because of its theme (i know you are comfortable with a range of erotica and jen's the mod, so naturally i'd hear from you both, but i figured everyone else is sending me on the road to hell for discussing masturbation).

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

Masturbation is a funny topic for some folks. I thought your Twice A Week submission was really clever and am now a little sore that I can't go read it again. The dialog was wonderfully clever. I loved the line, 'You really are an oily old man, aren't you?'

I am feeling a little exposed too though. My last chapter of Breathe got over 30 responses and this one just barely made 10. It also hasn't gotten much response here on lj. Of course, it could also be that everyone simultaneously realized that my writing really is crap. I also posted a drabble response to the No One Is Looking challenge and I swear you could hear crickets chirping. I did worry it had a sort of non or dub con feel to it. It wasn't but I suppose it could be read that way.

Why am I suddendly tempted to write something squicky to see what happens? Glutton for punishment probably. What could I do with one of the four remaining challenges (I haven't done Curry, Share A Cheesecake, Therapy or Twice A Week) that would be squicky? And like, not violate the comm's rules?

Bestiality pops into mind as being sufficiently squicky...I'd have to double check the comm guidelines.

Golden Shower?

Left to my own devices I'm really not so devious. You see how you are a bad influence here, don't you?

[duck-or-rabbit.livejournal.com]

I'm sure the only reason you haven't received as many reviews as you expect is because how closely together your chapters and drabbles were posted.

I just figure that since Sirius and Hermione aren't my ship, I'm not going to post if people aren't reading; sometimes when a writer presents an unfamiliar characterization, or one that doesn't match their impression of their character, it can ruin the mental portrayal for them, you know what I mean? I don't want to do that with S/H shippers, so I'll just stay out of it. I don't really write a possessive Sirius, or an erudite Hermione, common characterizations that readers love. :) I joined the comm to find great new writers, and I did, from ilexx to karamasslave to ghostgum and everyone in between.

Good luck with your next drabble. I'm sure it will be great!

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

See the icon?
*snickers*

Jen's gonna kill me.

Erudite...is that a nice way to say swotty? Yeah, we do like her like that but in our collective defense that was her in canon.

I like the way you write Sirius! I will be impatiently waiting for more about him and his other woman then. I just know there is a fanon staple pairing waiting to happen with you leading the way!

[duck-or-rabbit.livejournal.com]

Yeah, we do like her like that but in our collective defense that was her in canon.

Oh, there's nothing to defend. :)