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Title: Sirius' Booty
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ceredwensirius
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grangerblack100
Challenge: Pirate
Rating: PG
Pairings: Hermione/Sirius
Word Count: 101
Summary: Sirius couldn't care less what anyone thought.
Sirius couldn't care less what anyone thought. Not while delicate feminine fingers ran soothingly through his hair, stroking him tenderly, assuring him that his life was exactly the way he wanted it to be; warm, safe and most importantly, loved, here in her embrace. Not even when Ron and Mrs. Weasley practically accused him of being the pirate that had stolen their treasure.
No, not even then.
My treasure now.
Turning his head away from her hand and into her soft belly he kissed her abdomen and ran his gaze up through her breasts to her eyes, smiling all the while.
Author:
ceredwensiriusWritten For:
grangerblack100Challenge: Pirate
Rating: PG
Pairings: Hermione/Sirius
Word Count: 101
Summary: Sirius couldn't care less what anyone thought.
Sirius couldn't care less what anyone thought. Not while delicate feminine fingers ran soothingly through his hair, stroking him tenderly, assuring him that his life was exactly the way he wanted it to be; warm, safe and most importantly, loved, here in her embrace. Not even when Ron and Mrs. Weasley practically accused him of being the pirate that had stolen their treasure.
No, not even then.
My treasure now.
Turning his head away from her hand and into her soft belly he kissed her abdomen and ran his gaze up through her breasts to her eyes, smiling all the while.
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(check the community in your header?)
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Eeeek! Am fixing header now! That's what I get for cutting and pasting.
*is lazy*
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I think he is it in him to be so. Glad its coming through loud and clear.
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Simply wonderful.
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So this is a fave? Wow. I'll have to figure out what I'm doing right.
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~Megan
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Thanks!
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I couldn't think of this challenge without thinking of the Beastie Boys. So juvenile of me, I know...
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I'm trying to think of something less obvious but I may end up just giving in and going with it.
I'm glad you found the sweetness in it!
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I'm pondering it. I really want to finish out the year with having participated in all of the 2008 challenges but I'm 4 short right now so we'll see.
I'm having similar trouble with Curry. I'm so envious of
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For what it's worth I wanted to do something like the 9-1/2 weeks idea with the cheesecake thing, but I started the story too early in the idea, so it never got to the sexiness. I need to work on big-picture brevity.
Curry and cheesecake - is it a food thing? ;)
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I am feeling a little exposed too though. My last chapter of Breathe got over 30 responses and this one just barely made 10. It also hasn't gotten much response here on lj. Of course, it could also be that everyone simultaneously realized that my writing really is crap. I also posted a drabble response to the No One Is Looking challenge and I swear you could hear crickets chirping. I did worry it had a sort of non or dub con feel to it. It wasn't but I suppose it could be read that way.
Why am I suddendly tempted to write something squicky to see what happens? Glutton for punishment probably. What could I do with one of the four remaining challenges (I haven't done Curry, Share A Cheesecake, Therapy or Twice A Week) that would be squicky? And like, not violate the comm's rules?
Bestiality pops into mind as being sufficiently squicky...I'd have to double check the comm guidelines.
Golden Shower?
Left to my own devices I'm really not so devious. You see how you are a bad influence here, don't you?
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I just figure that since Sirius and Hermione aren't my ship, I'm not going to post if people aren't reading; sometimes when a writer presents an unfamiliar characterization, or one that doesn't match their impression of their character, it can ruin the mental portrayal for them, you know what I mean? I don't want to do that with S/H shippers, so I'll just stay out of it. I don't really write a possessive Sirius, or an erudite Hermione, common characterizations that readers love. :) I joined the comm to find great new writers, and I did, from
Good luck with your next drabble. I'm sure it will be great!
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*snickers*
Jen's gonna kill me.
Erudite...is that a nice way to say swotty? Yeah, we do like her like that but in our collective defense that was her in canon.
I like the way you write Sirius! I will be impatiently waiting for more about him and his other woman then. I just know there is a fanon staple pairing waiting to happen with you leading the way!
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Oh, there's nothing to defend. :)
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Well, its sweet that you think it's obvious. It is never so obvious to me.
I literally cringed at using pirate terminology, although a first draft (which was quite ridiculous) had him whispering something piratey to her. Thank goodness that wonderful piece of art wouldn't leave me alone.
I didn't credit her with inspiration for me because it was a gift for someone else and I don't know what the 'rules' are regarding all of that.
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Athough she does look exhausted doesn't she?
Lucky girl...
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Come on....I'm sure all the positive comments should give you some confidence...especially when it comes to drabbles, I think the only few times you've left us wanting for more is when you offer the dish but won't let us eat it, if you know what I mean;)!
I think the pirate reference is understandable from all that fly-away hair I think, but I don't get the Booty reference...is it just me?
She looks beyond exhausted to me....imagine getting that on a daily basis!!!!
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Confidence isn't really an issue for me, neither is being willing to take a risk and put my writing out there for scrutiny. I am always surprised by the response. It's turned me into something of a junkie but that doesn't mean I expect it. I am incredibly critical of my own writing and find a lot of it sort of obvious and sometimes rushed (I have patience issues).
Speaking of dishes that are yet to be served, I'm still working on the second part of 'Change of Plan'. I got a little farther with it, the damn thing just doesn't seem to want to get written.
Booty is pirate lingo for treasure.
Your last comment...
*drools*
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As far as Change of Plan goes, I know that when it comes to drabbles you have to deal with what's there and make do. But when it came to that particular story....and I know I feel that there is more to it you know...like a prologue and epilogue atleast. If I as a reader can crave for that, doesn't the creator identify with it a little bit? You've written yourself into a great set of possibilities with that one......may be once you're done with Breathe or if you need to take a break from it, you can delve more into it.....just a humble suggestion;)
PS: You deserve more than the comments you get honey!!
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well done as always
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