Drabble: Just To Taste

[ceredwensirius]

Title: Just To Taste
Author: ceredwensirius
Written For: grangerblack100
Challenge: Sharing A Cheesecake
Rating: PG
Warnings Suggestive language
Pairings: Hermione/Sirius
Word Count: 249
Summary: Sirius has something for Hermione's mouth.
Disclaimer: Not my characters.


Hearing him move around the kitchen without being able to use her sight to put it into context gave her an unsettling thrill. Metallic rustling of silverware in a drawer, vibrations up through the chair as he padded around the kitchen and then something heavy being settled on the table. Her grin and blush were all about anticipation and suspense because she had no clue what he had in mind.

"I've got something really good for your mouth," he said softly, the wooden chair scraping against the stone floor as he pulled it out to sit. The air around her was warmer as he pulled up closer, his scent and the quiet sound of his breath invading her senses.

"Now," he whispered with a puff against her cheek. "Open your mouth."

Timidly, she parted her lips, working down the nervous giggle.

"Wider, baby," he whispered again. "I want to fit it all in."

Then she did giggle and blush but obediently parted her lips more for him.

"That's it, good girl."

Startling slightly when she felt something cold against her lips, the smell of...chocolate and something more, slightly sour but sweet as well and opened a little wider to show her willingness for his game.

Sirius pushed the fork into her mouth, scraping it against her teeth. The taste of rich, creamy chocolate flooded her taste buds as she moaned her delight at the wonderful surprise.

Chewing slowly and then swallowing she said, "God, I love your cheesecake."

Comments

[ilexx.livejournal.com]

Oh god. Again with the awesome descriptiveness - nothing wasted, but so detailed. What just did me in though was the "I love your cheesecake," implying to me that Sirius made it. Which is just... *shudder* beyond sexy.

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

My Sirius is multi-talented, which is just shameless adoration on the part of this writer but I can't ever seem to help myself.

[ghostgum]

Oh, love the feel of this, the way you've captured the emotion that is sitting, unable to see, and wondering what someone you completely trust has in store for you...

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

I'm glad the trust came through. I struggled and struggled with this prompt.

[karmasslave.livejournal.com]

great work as always, :D ,

"Wider, baby," he whispered again. "I want to fit it all in."" oh god the second i read that, mind went right in to the gutter lol

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

Yeah, well...your mind was supposed to go there so that's a good thing, glad it's working here.

[ooosk.livejournal.com]

Chewing slowly and then swallowing she said, "God, I love your cheesecake."

That line killed me...

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

Thanks, honey! I think he's quite a clever wizard and would amaze with all the things he can do!

[padfootslover.livejournal.com]

This was lovely. Another favorite of mine. I love that he can cook. In my mind he can do just about anything, cook, sing, do the rumba, lol. But my favorite part has to be when he says he wants it all to fit in. It's something that Sirius would say.

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

My Sirius is multi-talented as well.

I think he enjoyed teasing her with that dirty little line.

[billeblacklupin.livejournal.com]

:) it might have been tame but man was I blushing lol keep up the good work

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

I was to trying to inject some sultry and intrigue into this piece. I'm so pleased that it had you bluhing!