Drabble: Not Quite Eden

[ceredwensirius]

Title: Not Quite Eden
Author: ceredwensirius
Written For: sirius100
Challenge: Fall
Rating: PG
Pairings: Hermione/Sirius
Characters: Sirius, Hermione
Warning: AU
Summary: Sirius flirts with Hermione.
Word Count: 101
Notes: Post Hogwarts. All characters property of JKR.

Hearing the squealing whine of old pipes, Sirius looked up from the newspaper to watch Hermione wash a bright, red apple, fresh from the fall harvest. Placing it on a worn out wooden cutting board and grabbing a knife from the drawer, she walked to the table and began carefully cutting it into wedges. Looking up to find him watching her intently, she blushed at the force of his gaze.

"Want some?" she asked, pushing the wedges forward.

Sirius smiled rougishly. "Tempting me with apples, love? Not terribly original, that."

Hermione snorted. "Adam was innocent, you Mr. Black, are anything but."

Comments

[dark-princess17.livejournal.com]

*Loves* Wonderful drabble, absolutely wonderful.

~Megan

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad you like it! Thanks for reading!

[duck-or-rabbit.livejournal.com]

I love the description of the apple! I got a real sense of action in this scene, which you know I go crazy for. :)

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

Oh, I'm so glad I was trying for that so it makes me that happy that it's working here.

[maajna.livejournal.com]

HAHA! Well played.

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

Glad you enjoyed it!

[lakshmi-black.livejournal.com]

Very nice!

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[blueeyedsuzie.livejournal.com]

Oh I BEG you to add more to this...

I know it's just a drabble, but please???? with Sirius on top, with cherrys ready to be eaten????

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

Well, you might see this or something similar to this in a far off distant chapter of Breathe.

I'm pleased that it's working so well for you.

[ooosk.livejournal.com]

You have no idea how glad I am that you are on my Flist!

*squees*

This is just...gah! I have no words. Gorgeous darling, gorgeous!

[damianarose.livejournal.com]

Excellent! Adorable with hints of dirty.