I'm not even sure if the desperate to-the-wall fucking would have been better when written out. Well, there is a sort of story that can do that and succeed. But in this drabble, I like that you just hinted at it in the shortest possible way. It's much more poignant that way, when we don't get to see the smut.
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Date: 2009-05-20 12:03 pm (UTC)