Date: 2009-05-19 01:04 pm (UTC)
Oh, I think this is really, really lovely. Honestly. I know you've written the boys having each other off, but within that context Remus and Sirius seem connected and whole. What I enjoy about this pairing is the palling-up that occurs between them as mates and the intimacy they can find in their own unique manner, and I think that spirit is completely here. For example:

"That turned you on, didn't it?" asks Sirius. His breath warms the tip of Remus' cock.

"What?" replies Remus, dazed, hard and not really up for conversation. Damn Sirius and his teasing.


Wonderful job, :D.
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