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2008-12-07 04:53 am (UTC)
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"That same smile seemed to threaten, the one that was just a little bit wise, like he was remembering the punchline to a particularly filthy joke."
I loved this line since it describes Sirius so very well.
I also loved how, in the 2nd to last paragraph, you nail Hermione and her active thought processes, and how Sirius' kiss short-circuits it. Well done.
More than anything I really liked the mood, pacing, and voice. Beautiful.
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Date: 2008-12-07 04:53 am (UTC)I loved this line since it describes Sirius so very well.
I also loved how, in the 2nd to last paragraph, you nail Hermione and her active thought processes, and how Sirius' kiss short-circuits it. Well done.
More than anything I really liked the mood, pacing, and voice. Beautiful.