THAT WAS SO FUCKING HOT! Oh, girrrrrrl, you nailed it. I really enjoyed the way you wrote Sirius's sense of humor. It wasn't as refined as what we know (from the films), but more like a man that had obviously gotten acclimated to his [new] surroundings and saw things for what they were.
The "Going to hell....Hell is paved with Hermione's arse.." line was brilliant and sassy. I actually giggled, because it was as if I could hear the guilty inner monologue he was having with himself.
Your smut was delicious. I love that you have no fear in writing crude words - that isn't done enough in fanfiction. We, as readers/writers, need to suspend morals and manners and need to use the words "cunt" and "pussy", rather than more polite words. Good job - several golden stars, darlin!
What I really liked the most was the validation he gave her prior to their fucking..."Not a one off..." Nice. Dirty, romantic, suggesting, but very nice.
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Date: 2008-10-21 05:30 am (UTC)THAT WAS SO FUCKING HOT! Oh, girrrrrrl, you nailed it. I really enjoyed the way you wrote Sirius's sense of humor. It wasn't as refined as what we know (from the films), but more like a man that had obviously gotten acclimated to his [new] surroundings and saw things for what they were.
The "Going to hell....Hell is paved with Hermione's arse.." line was brilliant and sassy. I actually giggled, because it was as if I could hear the guilty inner monologue he was having with himself.
Your smut was delicious. I love that you have no fear in writing crude words - that isn't done enough in fanfiction. We, as readers/writers, need to suspend morals and manners and need to use the words "cunt" and "pussy", rather than more polite words. Good job - several golden stars, darlin!
What I really liked the most was the validation he gave her prior to their fucking..."Not a one off..." Nice. Dirty, romantic, suggesting, but very nice.
Well done, smut girl. Excellent. Yummy.