The Sacrifice

Well at the encouragment of duck_or_rabbit I have started a review of The Sacrifice. I'm not making any promises but since a few of you have asked about it I thought I would let you know I was mulling it over. It will be weeks and weeks before you see anything.

From what I've seen so far there will already be quite a few changes that I will need to make, particularly with Sirius. He's a little too tame.

There are a few places where a typical Sirius over reaction would have been appropriate. There are some things that he accepts a little too easily. He might go along in the end but his first impulse would be to put a fight, I think, anyway.

There are some things I need to simplify and not try to over explain. I may cut a large amount of it out and make skips in time to move the story along to the end.

I think I will have the whole story written and hopefully beta'd.

Tonight I reread my very first sex scene ever. It was more sweet than anything. I may have to spice that up. We'll see.

Entertained

Title: Entertained
Author: ceredwensirius 
For: grangerblack100 
Rating: G
Word Count: 100
Challenge: “Sin”
Characters: Hermione/Sirius
Disclaimer: I don’t own Harry Potter or any of the characters
A/N: Not strictly a 'pairing' but there is interaction between these two. I kinda like it. When I first saw that siriuslyinluv71 had put it up as a potential prompt I just had to take a run at it. I’ve been hoping that jenwryn would use it in a challenge. 
M y wonderful icon was drawn by hyrmfaxe
Entertained

Watching Harry, Ron and Hermione interact was only mildly entertaining but seeing as it was the best Sirius could hope for so long as he was trapped in his family’s decrepit home, he availed himself of it as unobtrusively as he could. Tightly wound and more than a little obsessive made Hermione a fascinating specimen for him to analyze. Once and only once the prim bookworm had asked him what he would do first once his name was cleared. Sensing an opportunity to rattle her cage he let his mouth slowly curve up in a languid smile before answering.

“Sin.”