Alright I took a break... and since I can multitask. I plan to review each chapter.... because your story didn't let me go to bed last night. It kept me up until two! *scowls*
Fuck. Now you have me obsessed with it! *scowls more aggressively*
We all know how much I love this fiction or else I wouldn't be doing this.
Alright.
Starting off with the bitc- ... I mean, Hermione.
She is annoying me.... very much so. Sirius is what... like 21 or 22 here. Right! He is young and a tad bit flirtatious, what is wrong with that? He is a warm, sexy, kind, sexy, joking, sexy; individual. It's not his fault that Hermione never had compliments thrown her way, and she has to take everything that comes out of his sexy mouth and make it into something negative.
If she really hated Sirius so much. Why not ignore him altogether? SHE is the one who lets him get under his skin, not the other way around. If she wasn't so damned insecure, a man like Sirius Black wouldn't bother her as much.
But.... her character is perfect. The flaws, the selfishness, the hidden insecurities, and her crabbiness; makes her the perfect female counterpart. But I just don't like her because she opposes Sirius, and ANYONE who opposes Sirius will get hexed by me.
*Throws a Leg-Locker Curse at Hermione*
And the whole 'I am suffering more than you thing' is REALLY ANNOYING....
Who the hell does she think she is? Even if young!Sirius didn't go through half the shit as old!Sirius went through, SIRIUS (the young one) still suffered a LOT! Hermione is totally insensitive to others around her. She thinks people who have this fun loving way about them don't suffer as much.... that's very similar in canon!Hermione as well. (Example: Refusing to acknowledge that Fred and George are Brilliant).
Okay. Young!Sirius has just seen the corpses of James and Lily (how happy...), almost killed Peter, then instantly framed for James and Lily's murder, and then he traveled twenty years into the bloody future. Without giving the man time to adjust, Hermione decides to get prissy over one comment and throws a hissy fit. *sighs*
Different people have different ways of dealing with grief and Sirius' way was to laugh it off. Which is a hundred times more painful than crying. Closed minded indeed. (I will always love Xeno and Luna for that) *sigh*
Why can't someone just hold him tight? Why can't he have a female supporting him through and through (not a girlfriend... just a mate)? Tonks reactions were very nonchalant and I expected more from Ginny. She should have defended Sirius, he just plays around, instead Ginny decides she wants to hex him. Stupid Bint
*Hits Ginny with her own bat boogey hex*
Harry.... well he is Harry.
*Gives Harry a pat on the back*
Ron..... bad in bed.... *holds back laughter*
Not cool!
*Gives Ron a hug*
Remus.... ah.... Remus. Give him a good kick from me. He is too supportive of Hermy.
*Gives Remus kick*
And last....
BUT CERTAINLY NOT LEAST.....
My love....
Sirius Black
Everything about him just screams Canon! I don't know how you did it, but shit! He is exactly how I pictured him and MORE. And I am not just saying that because I love him.
No author portrays him this perfectly.... (that's a compliment)
*sigh*
*Gives Sirius a big smooch and tells him to run away with me*
*Sirius says no*
*sighs again*
I have completely fallen in love with this fanfiction. Man.... THIS ONE SHOULD WIN ALL THOSE DAMNED AWARDS!
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Date: 2008-12-29 06:11 pm (UTC)Fuck. Now you have me obsessed with it! *scowls more aggressively*
We all know how much I love this fiction or else I wouldn't be doing this.
Alright.
Starting off with the bitc- ... I mean, Hermione.
She is annoying me.... very much so. Sirius is what... like 21 or 22 here. Right! He is young and a tad bit flirtatious, what is wrong with that? He is a warm, sexy, kind, sexy, joking, sexy; individual. It's not his fault that Hermione never had compliments thrown her way, and she has to take everything that comes out of his sexy mouth and make it into something negative.
If she really hated Sirius so much. Why not ignore him altogether? SHE is the one who lets him get under his skin, not the other way around. If she wasn't so damned insecure, a man like Sirius Black wouldn't bother her as much.
But.... her character is perfect. The flaws, the selfishness, the hidden insecurities, and her crabbiness; makes her the perfect female counterpart. But I just don't like her because she opposes Sirius, and ANYONE who opposes Sirius will get hexed by me.
*Throws a Leg-Locker Curse at Hermione*
And the whole 'I am suffering more than you thing' is REALLY ANNOYING....
Who the hell does she think she is? Even if young!Sirius didn't go through half the shit as old!Sirius went through, SIRIUS (the young one) still suffered a LOT! Hermione is totally insensitive to others around her. She thinks people who have this fun loving way about them don't suffer as much.... that's very similar in canon!Hermione as well. (Example: Refusing to acknowledge that Fred and George are Brilliant).
Okay. Young!Sirius has just seen the corpses of James and Lily (how happy...), almost killed Peter, then instantly framed for James and Lily's murder, and then he traveled twenty years into the bloody future. Without giving the man time to adjust, Hermione decides to get prissy over one comment and throws a hissy fit. *sighs*
Different people have different ways of dealing with grief and Sirius' way was to laugh it off. Which is a hundred times more painful than crying. Closed minded indeed. (I will always love Xeno and Luna for that) *sigh*
Why can't someone just hold him tight? Why can't he have a female supporting him through and through (not a girlfriend... just a mate)? Tonks reactions were very nonchalant and I expected more from Ginny. She should have defended Sirius, he just plays around, instead Ginny decides she wants to hex him. Stupid Bint
*Hits Ginny with her own bat boogey hex*
Harry.... well he is Harry.
*Gives Harry a pat on the back*
Ron..... bad in bed.... *holds back laughter*
Not cool!
*Gives Ron a hug*
Remus.... ah.... Remus. Give him a good kick from me. He is too supportive of Hermy.
*Gives Remus kick*
And last....
BUT CERTAINLY NOT LEAST.....
My love....
Sirius Black
Everything about him just screams Canon! I don't know how you did it, but shit! He is exactly how I pictured him and MORE. And I am not just saying that because I love him.
No author portrays him this perfectly.... (that's a compliment)
*sigh*
*Gives Sirius a big smooch and tells him to run away with me*
*Sirius says no*
*sighs again*
I have completely fallen in love with this fanfiction. Man.... THIS ONE SHOULD WIN ALL THOSE DAMNED AWARDS!
Every category... except Non-Con... that's mine!