Oh, this was really lovely. The first three paragraphs of the shower scene were my favourite, the tension was just so real. I liked the French, perhaps because I had to think harder about what he was saying before I understood and it made it more erotic...?
And this bit was beautiful too, When he looks up finally, Remus can see what Sirius can't say: I didn't want to be without you. His heart soars, but now is really not the time for all of that.
Also, sorry for being a creeper, but who are the guys in your icon? They are the perfect Sirius and Remus :D
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Date: 2009-12-22 04:26 pm (UTC)And this bit was beautiful too,
When he looks up finally, Remus can see what Sirius can't say: I didn't want to be without you. His heart soars, but now is really not the time for all of that.
Also, sorry for being a creeper, but who are the guys in your icon? They are the perfect Sirius and Remus :D