ceredwensirius

Which rather makes him sound like a ward, not a leader, at least to my ears. You've two boys in animal suits with slightly altered minds but still with enough reason to know who they are and what they are doing. Remus doesn't have that luxury as a wolf. He might be bigger and harder to control but he's got two boys who think of themselves as leaders working to control him. IDK, I guess that explanation doesn't work for me. As to the other example, I think Remus was stressed and trying to keep a tense (tbc)