My God, this chapter was full of surprises. Tonks was a bit harsh but I can understand her reaction, two weeks of living hell is really too much. As always Sirius's protectiveness towards Hermione was just adorable.
The Daughter's part was doubtlessly a huge accomplishment, each speech was brilliantly written, not just by showing the importancy and prestige of the Daughter's purpose but also because each one fitted perfectly every interlocutor, none out of character. And I loved Hermione's little stunt with Umbridge, serves the old toad right.
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Great work.
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Date: 2008-04-13 11:14 pm (UTC)The Daughter's part was doubtlessly a huge accomplishment, each speech was brilliantly written, not just by showing the importancy and prestige of the Daughter's purpose but also because each one fitted perfectly every interlocutor, none out of character. And I loved Hermione's little stunt with Umbridge, serves the old toad right.
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Great work.