"Oh, you know, I catch her ogling me from time to time but I haven't made my move yet,"

Uncontrollable giggling awesomeness right here.

The scene setup in Part 1 is so gentle and detailed. I like.

And now we know that she's clueless to his affections so far - I'm glad it took a few scenes to figure it out, because otherwise I'm afraid it might have been a little too angsty. Making it clear later rather than off the bat helps ease the reader into the surroundings more, if that makes any sense. I'm kind of abstract tonight - sorry.