ext_363981 ([identity profile] lakshmi-black.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ceredwensirius 2008-07-30 12:48 pm (UTC)

Wow, Sirius and Harry's reunion couldn't be better written, all the right emotions and feelings were there in the right place. Got to admire Remus, always in control, even if inside is not, but always the secure port that all characters turn to when in need. Ginny's determination is very funny, very good idea to use that as comic relief in a somehow sad chapter and again Sirius was just perfect, there are no others ways to right him in this situation, the way you wrote it's Sirius through and through (is this the expression? I hope so).

By the way, I'm curious about Innocence next chapter, you ended the previous one in a sort of cliffhanger (albeit, very well disguised).

Update soon.

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