Okay, you're killing me with his references to "Dad" Moony. It's great humor. I'm sure you won't go too far with it, because soon he'll realize the value Remus was and is, no matter what age.

I love his playful games with her. She's an easy target and like I write him, she amuses and intrigues him. It's a good combination, which is why this couple...was meant to be!

His cursing. It works for me. I've seen/written some words and believe that it might be a bit brash, but he was a young adult...that was quite outrageous. His freaking out with FUCK just fits. Carry on. Love him. Just loving his interactions.


"...as if she were slow." I can see his eyes big and nodding to her as if he was speaking a foreign language. Very excellent visuals, chicky!