Fantastic! (and for such a good cause, too, how lovely of you). I had lots of favorite bits, but my most favorite was this, He had braved the very idea of a snarling tigress and charged forward to save his damsel in distress only to discover there is no damsel, and he is the only one distressed. Your Remus was very Remus and your Sirius so very tremendously Sirius and I loved them both. It's a great story!