ext_114001 ([identity profile] todefinebeauty.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ceredwensirius 2010-02-01 06:17 am (UTC)

Ooh, this is so lovely. It's sad at times and the way you write them in this kind of situation - it's as real as it can be (considering that Sirius has come back from the dead... :P). I also love the pace of this, how slow and easy going it is, sweet but not exactly fluffy, and how you've written each of their characters. They seem so true to... them :) Remus catching Sirius trying to have a wank in the shower and seeming him being distressed about it, and coaxing him to relax... I just thought you handled this topic so well! I don't know what else to say, but this was wonderful and I really enjoyed reading it - it's going to be heading to my memories for sure :)

I haven't been back in the R/S fandom for a little while and this kind of writing makes me realize what I've missed :) Thank you for this!

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