Okay, now I can officially and publicly tell you how much I liked this. Not only was the arranged marriage thing a refreshing spin on their story, but the whole thing felt very, painfully, awkwardly real. And I mean "awkward"in a good way because, Merlin knows, real life is awkward!

I loved each and every one of your characters and, again, their actions, emotions, and motivations, felt very real.


Great job.